Monday, November 11, 2019
T4W3 Lukas describing ride and water park
Hey bloggers this is the same thing as last post adverbs,adjectetves,verbs, similes,allitration,meatephorts.thats what ive done here but describing a ride and water bending.
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Hi Lukas,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you added in a lot of detail into your writing. I also like how you showed us the pictures of what it looked like.
Maybe next time you could make the slide your writing on make it look like what you imagine.
But You did Great!
Hi Lukes
ReplyDeleteI like how you added all the desribing tools you know!
I also added charters in my writing!
Can you please add a diffrent backround
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