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Thursday, November 21, 2019

radecal snow ride



Hello bloggers Miss Lee told us to write about a pobble 365 photo or our weekend. Mine is a narrative about my poble photo.
Mike did go up a snowy hill and the rest is a TOP SECRET. 
Can you spot the unlucky things that happened to Mike?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Lukas its Grant
    I like how much detail you added using onomatopoeia and people talking.
    It reminds me of my poble writing I did. I wrote about Alice and how she was a magician.
    Maybe work on it more cause the first sentence said exbicked and i don't know what that means.
    From Grant

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