My first step on the moon
I was as nervous as could be
But then I was excited
As you can believe
I felt like I was floating
High above the world
Imagine it was you
And not me.
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Hey Lukas!
ReplyDeleteMikey here. Congratulations on completing another activity! You're doing an awesome job. :)
What a great poem! I think you've definitely captured how it would feel to travel to the moon. If you could, would you actually want to go to the moon?
Mā te wā,
Mikey :)
Thank you Mikey, I would rather go on Mars to see the biggest volcano in our solar system.
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