Monday, August 12, 2019
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it is spelt Lukas
ReplyDeleteLukas you did well in your writing but the thing you need to work on is saying positive things instead of saying you are going to shoot bullies you can say something like I would want Nerf guns at school cause it might be a lot of fun for everyone.
ReplyDeletethanks for the feed back (:
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